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ego
Aug 3, 2011 4:04:59 GMT -5
Post by shadow wolf on Aug 3, 2011 4:04:59 GMT -5
Name- Tison bull Age- 17 Appearance- on its way Bonded with Biometal- fc00.deviantart.net/fs24/i/2008/014/3/2/BioMetal_Model_B__by_Rzx282.jpgthe biometal is model S for shadow walk, when fused looks like. fc05.deviantart.net/fs19/i/2008/100/3/9/Mega_Man_ZX_Armageddon_by_meteoramaxwell.pngjust color the white black and the yellow red . Bio- he found his biometal when he was around 7 and instantly knew they would be perfect for eachother. ever sense he has trained to use it. he is now ready to fight against any enemy. Paraphernalia- a cell phone lol class type: weapon class Attacks and abilities while transformed- well transformed the Night suit harnesses the power of darkness. Shadow strike: using the shadows around him he teleports and strikes the enemy. shadow bind: stuns the enemy for a small amount of time. shadow blast: shoots a shadow attack at enemies. ability stealth walk: using shadows terns invisible for a short time. Name: model SW (shadow walker) Age: 56 Appearance: Biometal- fc00.deviantart.net/fs24/i/2008/014/3/2/BioMetal_Model_B__by_Rzx282.jpg. Origins: this bio metal was made so "guardian" could fallow mavericks without being ditected. but it was lost in a maverick fight about 25 years ago, 8 years after it was lost, tison found it and has used it ever sense. Bound to: for now tison bull
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ego
Aug 3, 2011 14:45:20 GMT -5
Post by outerlimits on Aug 3, 2011 14:45:20 GMT -5
The biometal and merged picture are good, as are the abilities. Little iffy on him having a biometal for so long, but what the fuck, go for it.
I would prefer you use a different picture for his normal look though since that's a picture of Vent, who is one of canon ZX's main characters.
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ego
Aug 3, 2011 17:20:23 GMT -5
Post by outerlimits on Aug 3, 2011 17:20:23 GMT -5
Also you didn't say what type of class your megaman is for getting new weapons/abilities and you need a bio for your biometal.
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ego
Aug 3, 2011 22:40:46 GMT -5
Post by shadow wolf on Aug 3, 2011 22:40:46 GMT -5
look better??
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ego
Aug 3, 2011 22:53:39 GMT -5
Post by outerlimits on Aug 3, 2011 22:53:39 GMT -5
Ok, what you need to do is get rid of the "class: idk yet" at the top since you already have a "class type: idk which one it is but he gets a new weapon everytime he defeats a boss character."
Btw, that class type is the, tada, Weapon Class! So change it to that.
Also, you were already fine with your attacks and didn't need to add an "ult", especially since they're called "desperations" in this RP (Although they basically mean the same thing). So you should get rid of that since I already started basing off how people should do their attacks/abilities at first with Megaman on what you did, with a way to do basic attacks, three specified attacks, and a utility ability.
And biometals have a MUCH larger bio than that Jake. Look in the bio template thread and scroll to the part where it says "Biometals" and follow that.
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