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Otoka
Aug 31, 2010 20:44:58 GMT -5
Post by CrystalPrison on Aug 31, 2010 20:44:58 GMT -5
Really Jake? It's Kisame and his sword. Those who shall soon most likely die. I love you dearly...but this is pretty much plagiarism from Kishimoto's work you know....
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Otoka
Aug 31, 2010 21:24:06 GMT -5
Post by shadow wolf on Aug 31, 2010 21:24:06 GMT -5
how so i have a completely diffrent back story new techneaques and a demon that controls him who really cant live without water if you want me to change the appearance i will i just dont really know how to make him and yess he will soon die were all sad about it
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Otoka
Aug 31, 2010 21:28:21 GMT -5
Post by outerlimits on Aug 31, 2010 21:28:21 GMT -5
Huh? Die? Who? Who's gonna die? Your character or the guy you're ripping him off of?
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Otoka
Aug 31, 2010 21:38:28 GMT -5
Post by shadow wolf on Aug 31, 2010 21:38:28 GMT -5
the guy im ripping off and shut it ill fix it
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Otoka
Aug 31, 2010 21:47:38 GMT -5
Post by CrystalPrison on Aug 31, 2010 21:47:38 GMT -5
Water Shock Wave sounds a lot like Bursting Water Collision waves
The Water Shark things is remniscent of Five Sharks Eating, or water shark projectile.
Massive water dome: Great Exploding Water Collision waves, or the water prison
Kisames Shark dance in said Water Collision, your shark missles.
He can obviously fuse with his sword anyways....
And you don't have to delete everything about him....I was just commenting on the many similarities.....and that maybe you should put in a few stronger differences is all....
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Otoka
Aug 31, 2010 22:49:05 GMT -5
Post by shadow wolf on Aug 31, 2010 22:49:05 GMT -5
well the water dome isnt as big as the water collision wave and ill make diffrences more noticeable
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Otoka
Nov 16, 2010 19:39:30 GMT -5
Post by shadow wolf on Nov 16, 2010 19:39:30 GMT -5
new set bio up finally!!!!
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Otoka
Nov 16, 2010 20:43:13 GMT -5
Post by outerlimits on Nov 16, 2010 20:43:13 GMT -5
You mean more like take bits and pieces from the old order bios and mix them together for the new set >.>
You could at least change his history to show that the twins are merged now...
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Otoka
Nov 16, 2010 20:45:58 GMT -5
Post by shadow wolf on Nov 16, 2010 20:45:58 GMT -5
okay ill do that too even though i said that at the end of his bio.
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Otoka
Nov 16, 2010 20:50:28 GMT -5
Post by outerlimits on Nov 16, 2010 20:50:28 GMT -5
oh, didn't notice that, my bad.
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Otoka
Nov 16, 2010 20:54:54 GMT -5
Post by shadow wolf on Nov 16, 2010 20:54:54 GMT -5
its ok its a tiny sentence at the end should have put it at the top
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