Otoka

[CrystalPrison]

Really Jake? It's Kisame and his sword. Those who shall soon most likely die. I love you dearly...but this is pretty much plagiarism from Kishimoto's work you know....

[shadow wolf]

how so i have a completely diffrent back story new techneaques and a demon that controls him who really cant live without water if you want me to change the appearance i will i just dont really know how to make him and yess he will soon die were all sad about it

[outerlimits]

Huh? Die? Who? Who's gonna die? Your character or the guy you're ripping him off of?

[shadow wolf]

the guy im ripping off and shut it ill fix it

[CrystalPrison]

Water Shock Wave sounds a lot like Bursting Water Collision waves
The Water Shark things is remniscent of Five Sharks Eating, or water shark projectile.
Massive water dome: Great Exploding Water Collision waves, or the water prison
Kisames Shark dance in said Water Collision, your shark missles.
He can obviously fuse with his sword anyways....

And you don't have to delete everything about him....I was just commenting on the many similarities.....and that maybe you should put in a few stronger differences is all....

[shadow wolf]

well the water dome isnt as big as the water collision wave and ill make diffrences more noticeable

[shadow wolf]

new set bio up finally!!!!

[outerlimits]

You mean more like take bits and pieces from the old order bios and mix them together for the new set >.>

You could at least change his history to show that the twins are merged now...

[shadow wolf]

okay ill do that too even though i said that at the end of his bio.

[outerlimits]

oh, didn't notice that, my bad.

[shadow wolf]

its ok its a tiny sentence at the end should have put it at the top